Thursday, September 9, 2010

Desales who?

I don't know about you guys, but i am a man who wouldn't mind killing a stallion right now. No offense to you horse lovers out there, but the purple stallions are the only ones i seem to have a problem. Oh yeah! Theres a high school called St. Francis Desales, there not good at any sports, and are just "jelly" for the most part. <3

Excuse me, i'm getting carried away, but Desales was something i brought up in class i believe wednesday, and i believe they are a very interesting topic. Although we never talked about them in a way that was beneficial, we did talk about being allowed to talk about them. Along with that, we talked about poetry which is basically just nonsense, except sometimes it touches my heart. for example:

You Are Like The Diamond

You are like the diamond
You glimmer and glow
And shine so brightly
Some, like me, draw close
To feel your warmth, your heat
Only to find none

You are like the diamond
You are bright and strong
But you have no warmth, or love
It's a terrible game
To play with people's hearts
Like mine

You are like the diamond
You will last longer than most
But you will have no love
No warmth to back up that bright light
So what kind of life will it be?
Besides long?

Will you regret it someday?
Regret being so much like the diamond
Regret being so cold
And look for me
A find me gone?
Can I ever leave?

No, I can never leave you
I am drawn to this cold light
This false sense of warmth you give
I keep wishing and hoping
That someday, you will give warmth
But, this will never be

Diamonds last forever








This poem is very moving, and i love how much of her poem deals with the warmth she feels or receives when she is truly in love. This is one poem I like, which is quite surprising because i am a man that just doesn't enjoy reading at all! So in a way i think a Mr. Potter may be changing me or may be just brain washing me into start enjoying poetry.

Furthermore than BEAT DESALES, i mean way further! We talked about the making of a beautiful essay <3.
I myself do not really believe in writing because i think it is for people who are soft....LIKE DESALES. But anyways....lols......I do not like to read to, and basically just hate everything about english class in general, but Mr. Potter preforms miracles! Beyond what i can see and make me hungry for the knowledge he prepares for in the oven. So sir i do graciously except your kind words. BEAD DESALES.
KILL THE STALLIONS. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3



yours truley,
LUKE MOKMA

4 comments:

  1. Hahahahahah!!!! LOL :) you are sooooooo right desales is soft!!!

    But in the other hand, I loved the poem it was really pretty, and it does hit home on what some one is looking for in a relationship. And I agree, writing is no fun at all. I'm horrible at it, so I don't care for it, but I think I'll live.

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  2. dude i so agree with this. i hate poetry as well. p.s. beat desales

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  3. luke your story touched which is why im here at gahanna and not
    "there". and im with tommy ^ beat desales

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  4. Let me be the first to point out that although you do not believe in writing and you think it is for people who are soft, you were able to perform the act of writing in this blog wonderfully. You do not appear "soft" to me. Keep it up.

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